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It is natural to have weaknesses to people. But It is not important to have weaknesses but to modify our disadvantages. And now I am going to tell you about my advantages and shortcomings. My defect is not able to see the wood for trees. I only look at something sudden happen or very short distance. But It is necessary to see the trees, and mountains. Therefore I am going to read lots of books to enhance my quilty of life. Also I will exercise regularly to stay healthy. But I have my own benefit. I have a tendency to work really hard and to keep my regular patterns. It is really helpful to have enjoyable and persistently. On account of my preserverance, I will continue to study hard to achieve my goal. Hello my friendly teacher, Liza. I am pleased to do my homework! Haha Despite the fact that I am sort of tired, bit I am really happy and comfortable to do my homework. Good night~ see you tmr^^

Hello there my friendly and smart student^^   How\'s your Tuesday going? I hope that you are enjoying your time now. I really appreciate your passion in learning. You did this though you are busy and tired. Keep that up my dear. In time you will harvest all the things that you are doing now. For today\'s composition, I have to comment on these things. Study your choice of words. You have to study this. I want you to enrich your vocabularies by watching and reading more English dramas and books. Another is your articles. Be mindful about the correct usage of article the and a. Overall, I\'m still impress with the way you wrote your thoughts here. Keep on believeing, dreaming and aiming for your dreams and goals in life. See you later my dear^^ Teacher Liza   It is natural to have weaknesses to people. >>Better: It is natural for people to have weaknesses. But It is not important to have weaknesses but to modify our disadvantages. >>But it is not important if people have weaknesses, what matters most is to modify its disadvantages. And now I am going to tell you about my advantages and shortcomings. >>Correct >> OR: To begin with, now I am going to tell you about my adavantaged and shortcomings. >>OR: To begin with, now I am going to tell you about my strengths and shortcomings. My defect is not able to see the wood for trees. >>YOU MEAN TO SAY: One of my weaknesses is that I am not able to see the wood in a tree. >> YOU MEAN TO SAY: One of my weaknesses is that I can see the woods in trees ( I want you to tell me more about this one^^) I only look at something sudden happen or very short distance. >>YOU MEAN TO SAY: I only look at something that suddenly happend for a short span of time. But It is necessary to see the trees, and mountains. >>Correct Therefore I am going to read lots of books to enhance my quilty of life. >>Correct Also I will exercise regularly to stay healthy. >>Correct >>OR: In addition I will also exercise regularly for me to stay fit.But I have my own benefit. >>I also have my strengths in me. >> OR: I also have the good things about me. I have a tendency to work really hard and to keep my regular patterns. >>I have the tendency to work really hard and to keep my regular patterns. >>OR: I am hard working person and I can keep my regular routines. It is really helpful to have enjoyable and persistently. >>You mean to say: It is really helpful to me because I enjoy it and I do it persistently. On account of my preserverance, I will continue to study hard to achieve my goal. >> On my account of perseverance, I will continue to study hard and to achieve my goals.Hello my friendly teacher, Liza. >>Correct >> OR: Hello my friendly teacher Liza, I am pleased to do my homework! >>Correct Haha Despite the fact that I am sort of tired, bit I am really happy and comfortable to do my homework. >>Hahaha. Despite the fact that I am sort of tired but I am really happy and comfortable to do my homework. Good night~ see you tmr^^ >>Good night and see you tomorrow^^.