^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I won the best thesis award.
I wasn't so tense.
I had comfidence.
Because I did practice enough.
I recorded my voice and I heard it.
Practice again and again.
I proude of me hahaha^^;
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mi [이름] .
You deserve your award because you had so many s[이름]pless nights and busy days just finish your thesis on time. I am proud of you too as your teacher!^^Keep up th e good work!
I won the best thesis award.
>>>I won the best Thesis award.
I wasn't so tense.
>>>I did not feel tense at all.
I had comfidence.
>>>I had confidence.
Because I did practice enough.
>>>Because I ahd enough practice.
I recorded my voice and I heard it.
>>>I recorded my voice and heard it after.
Practice again and again.
>>>>I practiced again and again.
I proude of me hahaha^^;
>>>I am proud of my self.Hahahaha!
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