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2010-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

I won the best thesis award. I wasn't so tense. I had comfidence. Because I did practice enough. I recorded my voice and I heard it. Practice again and again. I proude of me hahaha^^;

강사 첨삭

Hi, Mi [이름] . You deserve your award because you had so many s[이름]pless nights and busy days just finish your thesis on time. I am proud of you too as your teacher!^^Keep up th e good work!   I won the best thesis award. >>>I won the best Thesis award. I wasn't so tense. >>>I did not feel tense at all. I had comfidence. >>>I had confidence. Because I did practice enough. >>>Because I ahd enough practice. I recorded my voice and I heard it. >>>I recorded my voice and heard it after. Practice again and again. >>>>I practiced again and again. I proude of me hahaha^^; >>>I am proud of my self.Hahahaha!

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