:)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
How are doing?
It\'s good to that you are back safe.
And it\'s good to hear that you were able to help other people.
You are such a good person and you have a good heart.
Isn\'t it? ^^
See you again tomorrow.
T. Rose ^^
Part1
I came back to my hometown last Saturday.
>> correct!
Since I had decided to go to the mission work, time flied like an arrow.
>> Since I decided to go to work in the mission, time flies like an arrow.
Timor-leste(East Timor) is a country that has miserable history.
>> Timor-leste(East Timor) is a country that has a miserable history.
it had been conquered from Portugal, Japan and Indonesia for 500 years.
>> It had been conquered by Portugal, Japan, and Indonesia for 500 years.
It became independent in 1999 but it still doesn\'t seem like an valuable country.
>> It became independent in 1999 but it still doesn\'t seem like a valuable country.
Our mission team \'BRIDGE\' visited that place to let them know the gospel and to provide necessary medical treatment.
>> correct!
My role in the team was receptionist in the medical part.
>> My role in the team was a receptionist in the medical part.
I checked some pain or disease of the patient firstly and sent to the doctor.
>> I checked some pain or diseases of the patients first and then send them to the doctor.
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