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강사 첨삭
Good afternoon! Thank you for sharing your experience during your mission. It always feels good to help other people. You are such a nice person. I\'m so proud of you. Take care!
Teacher Rose
As we know that Timor-leste people usually use Tetum for communication, we prepared Tetum, but they are using two more languages: Portuguese and Indonesian.
>> As we know, Timor-leste people usually use Tetum for communication, so we studied Tetum language, but they are using two more languages: Portuguese and Indonesian.
It was hard to communicate with the patients.
>> Correct.
Fortunately, there was one guy who was a chief of the drivers was able to speak English.
>> Fortunately, there was one guy who was the chief of the drivers, who could speak English.
He could translate their language to English.]
>> Correct.
It was big help to us.
>> He was a big help to us.
We spent 9days in Timor to give gospel, medical treatment and love but now I am sure that I gained lots of happiness more than I gave.
>> We spent 9 days in Timor, sharing gospel, medical treatment and love but now I am sure that I gained lots of happiness more than I gave.
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