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Topic : Some people prefer to work for a large company others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. Each of company has their strengths. Large company is much more stable than small company and it can provide great welfare system. However, as the large company divides the process of the work, laborer only knows the local information. On the other hand, in the small company, few laborer should complete whole process of the work. So they can learn entire process. It is much more helpful to the laborer's ability growth. I prefer the company that could help me to progress, but if I encountered the situation to choose the either large or small company, I probably choose the large company, because of the stability.

Hi there ^.^ How are you doing today? You have chosen a very good topic. I notice that you have a good perspective about your chosen idea. I appreciate that you used simple words for your essay and that is great. Continue exploring your topic and I encourage you to practice writing more essays. Have a good day. Thank you and see you in class. Teacher Kelly : ]   Topic : Some people prefer to work for a large company others prefer to work for a small company. >> Correct. Which would you prefer? >> Correct. >> OR: Which of the two would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. >> Correct.Each of company has their strengths. >> Each company has its strengths. Large company is much more stable than small company and it can provide great welfare system. >> Large company is more stable than small company and it can provide greater welfare system. However, as the large company divides the process of the work, laborer only knows the local information. >> However, as the large company divides the process of work, laborers only know the local information. On the other hand, in the small company, few laborer should complete whole process of the work. >> On the other hand, few laborers should complete the whole process of work in the small company. So they can learn entire process. >> So, they can learn the entire process. >> OR: So they can entirely learn the process. It is much more helpful to the laborer\'s ability growth. >> It is more helpful to the laborer\'s ability to grow. >> OR: It helps in the laborer\'s growth ability. I prefer the company that could help me to progress, but if I encountered the situation to choose the either large or small company, I probably choose the large company, because of the stability. >> I prefer the company that could help me to progress. But if the situation dictates me to choose between the large company and small company, I would probably choose the large company because of the stability. (**REMINDER: Avoid long sentences and excessive use of commas. Break it into several complete sentences.)