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Topic : It has recently been announced that a new high school may be bulit in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?
I support to build a new high school in my community, because of following two reasons.

>> I support to build a new high school in my community because of the following reasons.

The first reason is that current Korean the number of student per a teacher is around 30.

>> The first reason is that the number of Korean student per one teacher is around 30.

It is decreasing, but still much higher than average of OECD’s.

>> Correct.

If the number of student per a teacher were decreased, students would get better qualitative education.

>> If the number of student per one teacher were decreased, students would get better quality education.

For the second reason, building the high school occurs lots of employment and generates commercial development near the school.

>> For the second reason, building high school will result to lots of employment and could generate commercial development near the school.

It would contribute economic condition of our community.

>> DID YOU MEAN: It would contribute to the economic development of our community.