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Topic : Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which is prefer? If learners have a proper help, they will be able to learn further more. However, excessive interference decreases the will of learning and makes the student passive. Learners also cannot learn enough by themselves. Therefore they need a proper help. What is the proper help? In this part, I support the argument of Vygotsky who is a Russian psychologist. Proper help to his theory is between what learner can do by learner-self and what learner can do by someone’s help. Helping this gap stimulate the learning most. For this reason, learners need the teacher who gives suitable help to their students.

Good morning! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate your effort. Anyway, please go over some of my corrections please. Have a great day! Topic : Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Other think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which is prefer?If learners have a proper help, they will be able to learn further more. >> If learners are guided properly, they learn more. However, excessive interference decreases the will of learning and makes the student passive. >> Correct. Learners also cannot learn enough by themselves. >> Correct. Therefore they need a proper help. >> Therefore they need proper guidance. What is the proper help? >> What is the proper help for guiding a learner? In this part, I support the argument of Vygotsky who is a Russian psychologist. >> In this part, I support the argument of Vygotsky, a Russian psychologist. Proper help to his theory is between what learner can do by learner-self and what learner can do by someone’s help. >> Proper help according to his theory is what a learner can do by himself and what a learner can do with someone\'s help. Helping this gap stimulate the learning most. >> Building this gap stimulates learning the most. For this reason, learners need the teacher who gives suitable help to their students. >> For this reason, learners need teachers who give suitable help to their students.