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Today, I went a my friend's house first, I did do my homework then, I listened to music. My friend likes B.A.P and E.X.O so I listened to music about B.A.P and E.X.O 's song I knew that she has many songs , I was surprised. ... ... ... bye x 1000

Hello there my dear Sharon!   Happy weekend! How are doing so far? Are you enjoying your weekend? I hope you really are! Anyway, I oticed that your writing skil is improving. You now know the proper arrangements of words in a sentence. However, you must not forget to always begin a sentence with capital letter and end it with the appropriater punctuation mark. Nevertheless, you did great! Keep it up!   ~Teacher Shanee^^_   Today, I went a my friend\'s house >>Today, I went to my friend\'s house.first, I did do my homework >>First, I did my homework.then, I listened to music. >>Then, I listened to music.My friend likes B.A.P and E.X.O so I listened to music about B.A.P and E.X.O \'s song >>Correct! (Don\'t forget to add a period at the end of the sentence.)I knew that she has many songs , I was surprised. >>I already knew that she has many songs, but still I was surprised. >>Or: Didn\'t know that she has many songs so I was surprised. (I\'m not sure what you\'re trying to say.)... ... ... bye x 1000 >>Correct! >>Or: Bye!