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학생이 쓴 원문
My dear shanee
Hello~~^*^
I went to my middle school but It's very bored.
Ah!!!! I met my friends ... my friends isnot same class so
very s~~a~~d.
Maybe, I will make friends...
However I will last that meeting of my friends
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.
.
Bye!I will see you later
~student sharon~
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear Sharon!
Thanks for sharing these things to me.
Don\'t worry because your friends are real ones, they will stay as your friends no matter how far you are with them.
When you meet your friends, bring out the best while you\'re with them.
See you later in class!
~Teacher Shanee
My dear shanee
>>My dear Shanee,
Hello~~^*^
>>Correct!
>>Or: Hello there!I went to my middle school but It\'s very bored.
>>I went to my school but it was very boring.
>>Or: I went to my school but I was very bored in there.Ah!!!! I met my friends ... my friends isnot same class so very s~~a~~d.
>>Ah!!!!I met my friends. I am very sad because we\'re not in the same class.Maybe, I will make friends...
>>Correct!However I will last that meeting of my friends>>However. I will make my last meeting with my friend memorable.
>>Or: I will make meet my friends for the last time.
(I\'m not really sure what you mean with this. Please explain it to me later in class)Bye!I will see you later
>>Correct!
Or: Bye! I will see you later!~student sharon~
>>Your student,
Sharon
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