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2014-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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My Dear shanee, Hello~~ How are you?I'm find. why didn't you married? Ha!Ha!Ha! sorry~~~~~~~~~ I am watching drama, It starts 10'o clock. It is every mondays and Tuesdays This name is '기황후'. umm... umm... bye -your student-

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear Shron!   Thanks for sending in this letter! I\'m really happy to receive a letter from you everyday. Well, I didn\'t get married yet because I am still enjoying my freedom. You\'ll understand that when you grow up. Tell me about the drama that you\'re watching  in class, okay? Anyway, I hope that you\'ll review the corrections that I gave you. Always start proper nouns with capital letters. You must also not forget to begin sentences with upper case alphabets. Good night! See you tomorrow!   ~Teacher Shanee   My Dear shanee, >>My dear Shanee, Hello~~ How are you?I\'m find. >>Hello! How are you? Anyway, I\'m fine.why didn\'t you married? >>Why didn\'t you get married?Ha!Ha!Ha! sorry~~~~~~~~~ >>Correct! >>Or: Ha! Ha! Ha! I\'m sorry I asked that.I am watching drama, It starts 10\'o clock. >>Nowadays, I watch a drama. It starts at 10 o\'clock.It is every mondays and Tuesdays >>It airs every Monday and Tuesday.This name is \'기황후\'. >>It\'s title is 기황후\'.umm... umm... bye >>Umm...ummm...Bye! -your student- >>Your student, Sharon

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