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학생이 쓴 원문
My Dear shanee,
Hello~~ How are you?I'm find.
why didn't you married?
Ha!Ha!Ha! sorry~~~~~~~~~
I am watching drama, It starts 10'o clock.
It is every mondays and Tuesdays
This name is '기황후'.
umm... umm... bye
-your student-
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear Shron!
Thanks for sending in this letter!
I\'m really happy to receive a letter from you everyday.
Well, I didn\'t get married yet because I am still enjoying my freedom.
You\'ll understand that when you grow up.
Tell me about the drama that you\'re watching in class, okay?
Anyway, I hope that you\'ll review the corrections that I gave you.
Always start proper nouns with capital letters. You must also not forget to begin sentences with upper case alphabets.
Good night!
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee
My Dear shanee,
>>My dear Shanee,
Hello~~ How are you?I\'m find.
>>Hello! How are you? Anyway, I\'m fine.why didn\'t you married?
>>Why didn\'t you get married?Ha!Ha!Ha! sorry~~~~~~~~~
>>Correct!
>>Or: Ha! Ha! Ha! I\'m sorry I asked that.I am watching drama, It starts 10\'o clock.
>>Nowadays, I watch a drama. It starts at 10 o\'clock.It is every mondays and Tuesdays
>>It airs every Monday and Tuesday.This name is \'기황후\'.
>>It\'s title is 기황후\'.umm... umm... bye
>>Umm...ummm...Bye!
-your student-
>>Your student,
Sharon
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