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2014-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi shanee! I went an academy on Saturday. It's started at 2 o' clock and finished at 7 o' clock. It was very long times. what do you think about that? I thought terrible about that. Uhmm... which do you like better chocolateice cream or chocolate? Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha!It is very difficult!!!but I like a chocolateice cream. Bye^*^ from: sharon

강사 첨삭

Hello there!^.^

Thank you for sharing what happened to you last Saturday!^.^

About your question, I will answer that during our class.

Please check the corrections and the alternative sentences I made.

See you in class!^.^

~~T. Shanee~~

Hi shanee!

>>Hi, Shanee!
 I went an academy on Saturday.

>>I went to an/the academy on Saturday.
 It\'s started at 2 o\' clock and finished at 7 o\' clock.

>>It started at 2 o\'clock and finished at 7 o\'clock.

or>>I stayed there from 2 o\'clock to 7 o\'clock.
 It was very long times\'clock and finished at 7 o\'clock.

>>I spent long hours in the academy.
 what do you think about that?

>>Correct.

or>>What can you say about that?
 I thought terrible about that.

>>I thought it was terrible!

Uhmm... which do you like better chocolateice cream or chocolate?

>>Uhhm..Which do you like better? Chocolate ice cream or chocolate?
 Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha!It is very difficult!!!

>>Correct.(**Just remove the other exclamation points. You can only write one exclamation point in a sentence.)

but I like a chocolateice cream.

>>But I like chocolate ice cream.
Bye^*^

>>Bye. ^*^
from: Sharon

>>From: Sharon

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