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Hello there!^.^
Thank you for sharing what happened to you last Saturday!^.^
About your question, I will answer that during our class.
Please check the corrections and the alternative sentences I made.
See you in class!^.^
~~T. Shanee~~
Hi shanee!
>>Hi, Shanee!
I went an academy on Saturday.
>>I went to an/the academy on Saturday.
It\'s started at 2 o\' clock and finished at 7 o\' clock.
>>It started at 2 o\'clock and finished at 7 o\'clock.
or>>I stayed there from 2 o\'clock to 7 o\'clock.
It was very long times\'clock and finished at 7 o\'clock.
>>I spent long hours in the academy.
what do you think about that?
>>Correct.
or>>What can you say about that?
I thought terrible about that.
>>I thought it was terrible!
Uhmm... which do you like better chocolateice cream or chocolate?
>>Uhhm..Which do you like better? Chocolate ice cream or chocolate?
Ha!Ha!Ha!Ha!It is very difficult!!!
>>Correct.(**Just remove the other exclamation points. You can only write one exclamation point in a sentence.)
but I like a chocolateice cream.
>>But I like chocolate ice cream.
Bye^*^
>>Bye. ^*^
from: Sharon
>>From: Sharon
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