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2014-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Ha! my name is [이름] song hyeon. I am eating chicken at 11. It's very delicious but I worry that. Because I become fat. I studied english and math. It's very bored and difficult. Do you like math or english?

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Sharon!   Thanks for sharing these things to me. Don\'t eat too much chicken because eating much can harm your health. Anyway, I like English more than math. I am really slow in math. How about you? What do you like best? Don\'t forget to tell me your answer in class, okay?   Good night!   ~Teacher Shanee   Ha! my name is [이름] song hyeon. >>Ha! My name is [이름] Song Hyeon.I am eating chicken at 11. >>Correct!It\'s very delicious but I worry that.>It\'s very delicious but I worry because of that. Because I become fat. >>Because I might become fat.I studied english and math.>>Correct! It\'s very bored and difficult. >>It\'s very boring and difficult.Do you like math or english? >>Correct!

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