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A good Friday!

It\'s sad to hear that you caught a cold.

I hate it when I get sick even with the slightest fever or a small cold. It does get annoying especially when I have to blow my nose!

I do hope you get well soon.

I have provided some corrections for your composition.

You are improving so keep up the good work!

Take care of yourself and enjoy the weekend!

_Teacher Shanee

Hello~ shanee!

>> Hello, Shanee!
I\'m sick, I have cold.

>> I\'m sick; I have a cold.
So I will go to the hospital, it get very annoyed.

>> So, I will go to the hospital because the cold makes me feel annoyed.

OR>> So, I will go to the hospital because the cold annoys me.
Do you have a cold?

>> CORRECT
If you don\'t have a cold, you very lucky.

>> If you don\'t have a cold, then you\'re very lucky.
Now my father is watching TV.

>> My father is watching TV now.
Now time is at 11:51.

>> The time now is 11:51.
When do you sleep?

>> When do you usually sleep?

OR>> What time do you usually sleep?