...ㅎㅎㅎ
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, my dear shanee!
How are you? I'm fine.
Today, I tell obout my mom.
My mother manages owns'cafe.
The cafe is very large and two floor.
Everyday, my mom came back home late.
... ... Bye!
Form: sharon
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Sharon!
Thank you for sharing something about your mom!
Since your mom manages her own cafe, she\'s a business woman then.
Would you like to be a business woman like your mom when you grow up?
Hmmm...tell me your answer in class.
Anyway, you forgot again to start our names in capital letters. That is very essential so don\'t forget to do it, okay?
Start your day with a bright smile!
~Teacher Shanee
>>Hello, my dear Shanee!
How are you?
How are you?
>>Correct!
I\'m fine.
>>Correct!
Today, I tell obout my mom.
Today, I tell obout my mom.
>>Today, I\'ll tell you about my mom.
>>Or:Today, I\'ll talk about my mom.
My mother manages owns\'cafe.
My mother manages owns\'cafe.
>>My mother manages her own cafe.
The cafe is very large and two floor.
The cafe is very large and two floor.
>>Her cafe is very large and it has two floors.
Everyday, my mom came back home late.
Everyday, my mom came back home late.
>>Everyday, my mom comes back home late.
... ... Bye!
... ... Bye!
>>Correct!
Form: sharon
Form: sharon
>>From: Sharon
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.