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2014-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

I was busy working on the others. so I couldn't do homework. Today is rainy day. these days there are much fine dust on the air. so I couldn't breath whenever i was outside. but now fortuneately, thanks for rain, the air became cool! In spring,In korea,beacuse of fine dust from China often afflict korean. then most people should put a mask to breath clearly whenever they're outside. In such situation, the rain is a present to us. it's needless to say. I hope spring go bye quickly. It seems like my English speaking skill is getting better than before Thank for my teacher Jane^^. I always feel gratitute to my teacher Jane! Thank you for looking through my writing~

강사 첨삭

  Hi there! How have you been doing for today?   Thank you for giving time to do your homework. Anyway, good job! but still practice your sentence constructions.But still you did well.^^   Keep it up!   See you and have a wonderful day tomorrow. - T. Jane   I was busy working on the others. so I couldn\'t do homework. >>I was busy working, so I couldn\'t do my homework. Today is rainy day. >>Today, it is raining. these days there are much fine dust on the air. >>These days, there are a lot of fine dust in the air.  so I couldn\'t breath whenever i was outside. >>So, I couldn\'t breathe whenever I\'m outside. but now fortuneately, thanks for rain, the air became cool! >>But now, fortunately, thanks to rain, the air become cool! In spring,In korea,beacuse of fine dust from China often afflict korean. >>In Korea, during spring, because of fine dust from China. we are often being affected. then most people should put a mask to breath clearly whenever they\'re outside. >>Most people should wear a mask to breathe clearly whenever they are outside. In such situation, the rain is a present to us. it\'s needless to say. >>In such situation, the rain is present to us. It is needless to say. I hope spring go bye quickly. >>I hope spring will pass by quickly. It seems like my English speaking skill is getting better than before  >>It seems that my English skill is getting better and better. Thank for my teacher Jane^^. I always feel gratitute to my teacher Jane! >>thanks to my Teacher Jane^^. I always feel grateful to my Teacher Jane. Thank you for looking through my writing~ >>Thank you for checking my writing.  

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