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학생이 쓴 원문
I was busy working on the others. so I couldn't do homework.
Today is rainy day.
these days there are much fine dust on the air.
so I couldn't breath whenever i was outside.
but now fortuneately, thanks for rain, the air became cool!
In spring,In korea,beacuse of fine dust from China often afflict korean.
then most people should put a mask to breath clearly whenever they're outside.
In such situation, the rain is a present to us. it's needless to say.
I hope spring go bye quickly.
It seems like my English speaking skill is getting better than before
Thank for my teacher Jane^^. I always feel gratitute to my teacher Jane!
Thank you for looking through my writing~
강사 첨삭
Hi there! How have you been doing for today?
Thank you for giving time to do your homework.
Anyway, good job! but still practice your sentence constructions.But still you did well.^^
Keep it up!
See you and have a wonderful day tomorrow.
- T. Jane
I was busy working on the others. so I couldn\'t do homework.
>>I was busy working, so I couldn\'t do my homework. Today is rainy day.
>>Today, it is raining. these days there are much fine dust on the air.
>>These days, there are a lot of fine dust in the air.
so I couldn\'t breath whenever i was outside.
>>So, I couldn\'t breathe whenever I\'m outside. but now fortuneately, thanks for rain, the air became cool!
>>But now, fortunately, thanks to rain, the air become cool! In spring,In korea,beacuse of fine dust from China often afflict korean.
>>In Korea, during spring, because of fine dust from China. we are often being affected. then most people should put a mask to breath clearly whenever they\'re outside.
>>Most people should wear a mask to breathe clearly whenever they are outside. In such situation, the rain is a present to us. it\'s needless to say.
>>In such situation, the rain is present to us. It is needless to say. I hope spring go bye quickly.
>>I hope spring will pass by quickly. It seems like my English speaking skill is getting better than before
>>It seems that my English skill is getting better and better. Thank for my teacher Jane^^. I always feel gratitute to my teacher Jane!
>>thanks to my Teacher Jane^^. I always feel grateful to my Teacher Jane. Thank you for looking through my writing~
>>Thank you for checking my writing.
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