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2014-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Hello, my teacher shanee! Long time no see,because I came back at home late. My brother is always said "time over" to his teacher. It's very interesting, he is always tired. So he complainted to me. Because after my broter have the class, I have the class . his complaint is annoied. Did you have this feeling? Do you have brother or sister?

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Sharon!

Happy weekend!
Don\'t be annoyed with your brother my dear...
He\'s just complaining because he\'s probably really tired.
Just explain to him that you can\'t do anything since you need to study.
Anyway, it\'s just for ten minutes in a day.^^_
As for your questions, yes, I also get annoyed with my siblings sometimes.
It is especially when I am not feeling good. But I don\'t feel it for a long time.
I have three sisters and two brothers. But my two brothers are already dead.
My older brother died when he was 15 years old and I was 14 at that time. My younger brother died three days after he was born.

Let\'s talk again on Monday!

Take care!

~Teacher Shanee

Hello, my teacher shanee!
>>Hello my teacher Shanee!
Long time no see,because I came back at home late.
>>Long time no see because I came back home late.
My brother is always said \"time over\" to his teacher.
>>My brother always say, \"time over\" to his teacher.
>>Or: My brother always tell his teacher that it\'s time over.
It\'s very interesting, he is always tired.
>>It\'s very interesting that he\'s always tired.
So he complainted to me.
>>He complained to me.
Because after my broter have the class, I have the class .
>>Because after my brother\'s class is my class with you.
his complaint is annoied.
>>His complaint is annoying.
Did you have this feeling?
>>Correct!
Do you have brother or sister?
>>Do you have a brother or a sister?

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