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Hi there my dear!

Thanks for sending me your composition!

I had fun reading about your mom and her cafe.

Your mom is a great person. It is good to know that she has her own business to manage.

Keep up the good work! ^_^ I\'ll answer your question later in class.

Teacher Shanee

Hello my dear shanee!

>>Hello my Dear [Name]!
I talk about my mom.

>>I will talk about my mom.
she is tall and beautiful.

>>She is tall and beautiful.
And she manage her cafe.

>>And she manages her own cafe.
It\'s very big and near sea.

>>It is very big and it stands near the sea.
Cafe\'s menu is pizza,ice cream, cream spaghetti,duck meat and tea.

>>The cafe\'s menu includes pizza, ice cream, cream spaghetti, duck meat and tea.
I like ice cream and cream spaghetti.

>>I like the ice cream and the cream spaghetti.
What is your favorite food?

>>Correct!

OR>How about you, what is your favorite food?
-sharon-

>>Sharon.