...ㅎㅎㅎ
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening or Good morning!!
have nothing to say to you ha!ha!ha!
I have cold that is 2-weeks ago.
My brother likes computer game.
It's name is LOL ,it's very popular.
My mom went to the my class.
Maybe she talks about me.
See you tomorrow
-Sharon-
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Sharon!
Thanks for sending another letter!
I\'m glad that you never fail to write a letter to me.
I\'m happy every time you share your activities or anything about your family.
Keep doing so, okay?
See you tomorrow!
Good night!
~Teacher Shanee^^_
Good evening or Good morning!!
>>Good evening or good morning!!have nothing to say to you ha!ha!ha!
>>I have nothing to say to you! Ha! Ha! Ha!I have cold that is 2-weeks ago.
>>I have colds for two weeks already.My brother likes computer game.
>>My brother likes a computer games.It\'s name is LOL ,it\'s very popular.
>>Its name is LOL and it\'s very popular.My mom went to the my class.
>>Correct!Maybe she talks about me.
>>Maybe she talked about me.See you tomorrow
>>Correct! (See you tomorrow!)-Sharon-
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