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강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear!
Thanks for sharing something about your dad.
Don\'t get angry with your brother, okay?
Just try to keep calm and smile always.
Getting angry will just make you look older.
Anyway, I usually go to work at 4 pm.
Talk to you again tomorrow!
Teacher Shanee
Hello My dear shanee!
>>Hello my dear Shanee!
I\'m so so, I hate my brother.
>>I feel so so and I hate my brother.
He was made my mind is angry.
>>He made me angry.
It\'s his special ability.
>>Correct!
Today I talk about my father.
>>Today, I\'ll talk about my father.
He is fat and handsome?
>>He is fat and handsome.
He is busy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>>Correct!
>>Or: He is always busy.
He has many works so I\'m worried my father.
>>He has many works so I\'m worried about him.
Ah! What time do you work?
>>Correct!
>>Or: What time do you go to work?
Bye
>>Correct!
-sharon-
>>Sharon
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