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강사 첨삭
Hello there!^,^
Thank you for sharing your ideas and what happened to you over the weekend.
Please check the necessary corrections I made.
I am also sorry to hear that you had medicines. Are you ok now?
Let\'s meet again later and talk about your condition.
~~T. Shanee~~
Hello my dear Shanee!!
>>Hello, my dear Shanee!
I went to the hospital.
>>Correct OR >> I went to hospital.
I took medicine, it has two yello tablets and two white tablets.
>>I took medicines, two yellow tablets and two white tablets.
Maybe, It isn\'t very delicious.
>>They weren\'t very delicious.
Ah! MY mom will go the cafe.
>>My mom will go to a cafe.
I think my father will come back at home late.
>>I think my father will come home late.I want go hiking in spring with father.
>>I want to go hiking in spring with my father.
But now a days, he has a lot of stress is his work.
>>But nowadays, he has a lot of stress from his work.
So I can\'t talk that.
>>So I can\'t tell him./So I can\'t talk about that with him.
Uhumm... I\'m sleep
>>I\'m sleepy.
Bye ~3~
>>Bye.
-Sharon-
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