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2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hello my dear Shanee!! I went to the hospital. I took medicine, it has two yello tablets and two white tablets. Maybe, It isn't very delicious. Ah! MY mom will go the cafe. ... I think my father will come back at home late. I want go hiking in spring with father. But now a days, he has a lot of stress is his work. So I can't talk that. Uhumm... I'm sleep Bye ~3~ -Sharon-

강사 첨삭

Hello there!^,^

Thank you for sharing your ideas and what happened to you over the weekend.

Please check the necessary corrections I made.

I am also sorry to hear that you had medicines. Are you ok now?

Let\'s meet again later and talk about your condition.

~~T. Shanee~~

Hello my dear Shanee!!

>>Hello, my dear Shanee!
 I went to the hospital.

>>Correct OR >> I went to hospital.
 I took medicine, it has two yello tablets and two white tablets.

>>I took medicines, two yellow tablets and two white tablets.
 Maybe, It isn\'t very delicious.

>>They weren\'t very delicious.
 Ah! MY mom will go the cafe.

>>My mom will go to a cafe.

I think my father will come back at home late.

>>I think my father will come home late.

I want go hiking in spring with father.

>>I want to go hiking in spring with my father.
But now a days, he has a lot of stress is his work.

>>But nowadays, he has a lot of stress from his work.
So I can\'t talk that.
>>So I can\'t tell him./So I can\'t talk about that with him.

Uhumm... I\'m sleep

>>I\'m sleepy.
Bye ~3~

>>Bye.
-Sharon-

>>Correct.

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