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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!^.^
I really appreciate that you instructed me how to cook Japchae.^.^
Anyhow, it is much better if you follow the pattern VERB + Object in giving instructions.
For example: Cut the vegetables well.
This sentence has our imaginary subject YOU.
The complete sentence would be: YOU cut the vegetables well.
But we eliminated it so you have to start the sentence with a base form of a verb.
If you find this explanation confusing, I will tell you more in class!^,^
Have a great day!
~~T. Shanee~~
Hello, my dear shanee!
>>Hello, my dear Shanee!
Afther I finished my class, I ate japchae.
>>After I finished my class, I ate Japchae.
This is delicious so I instrut about japchae\'s recipe.
>>This is delicious so I will instruct you what to prepare for the recipe and how to cook it.
First, noodles boil wather for 30 minutes
>>First, put the noodles in boiling water for 30 minutes.
Second, the marinade make well
>>Second, marinade.(What do I have to marinade?^.^)
Third, the vegetables cut well
>>Third, cut the vegetables well.
Forth, all mix
>>Fourth, mix them all together.
Wow this is easy!!!!
>>Correct.
Bye!
>>Correct.
- Sharon\'s cooking class -
>>Correct.
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