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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello,my dear Shanee!
Long time no see,I'm sad.
I went to school at 8 o'clock.
But actually we went to school at 9 o'clock.
Today we must be POPS.
It is that we exercise various exercises.
My 50 meter's record is 9.45.
Most girls' record have 9.** seconds.
Ha!Ha!Ha! I feel really great.
Bye
-sharon-
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Sharon!
I\'m glad to hear from you after several days.
I\'m also happy to know that you are doing just fine.
Anyway, keep doing great and take good care of yourself always.
See you tomorrow in class!
~Teacher Shanee
Hello,my dear Shanee!
>>Or: Hello my dear Shanee!Long time no see,I\'m sad.
>>Long time no see. I\'m sad.I went to school at 8 o\'clock.
>>Correct!But actually we went to school at 9 o\'clock.
>>But actually, we usually go to school at 9 o\'clock.Today we must be POPS.
>>Or: Today we must do POPS. (I don\'t know what pops is.)It is that we exercise various exercises.
>>It is about doing various exercises.My 50 meter\'s record is 9.45.
>>Correct!Most girls\' record have 9.** seconds.
>>Most girls\' records have 9.** seconds.
>>Or: Most girls\' records have over 9 seconds.Ha!Ha!Ha! I feel really great.
>>Correct!Bye >>Bye!
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