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HI [이름]!

Happy Thursday!

How are you today? I hope that you are having a marvelous time.

You did a pretty nice job with your essay.

Please be careful with your sentence structure.

Can you please tell me about your study habits in class? See you!

Teacher Nina

I think the way to study is different from country.

>> Did you mean: I think the way of studying is different in every country.
but East Asian have common things in studying.

>> But in East Asian countries, they have a common thing.

>> OR: But in East Asian countries, there are similarities.
Most parents are passionate in their children.

>> Did you mean:  Most parents are passionate with their children.
In western society, the thought of studying have a different meaning.

>> Correct
It means a step of the procedure to find the way of his/her life.

>> Correct

>> OR: It is a stepping stone towards her/his future.
Most Korean people maybe boast the European or American life which is meaning to live their own life.

>> Did you mean: Most Korean people may boast he European or American life which means to live their own life.
During the session of studying, Western people get an identity through an experience.

>> In the session of studying, Westerners get an identity through an experience.

>> OR: In the process of studying, Westerners get an identity through an experience.

Carolyn told me that they have a system of Home school.

>> Carolyn told me that they have the system of a home school.

In Home school, the mother or father is the teacher.

>> Correct

they can learn from real home room teacher. and they can learn creativity which can not be learned from a book.

>> They can learn from a real homeroom teacher and they can learn creativity which can\'t be learned from books.