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학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to talk about myself after ten years. Long time as ten years. It seems long time to go and at the same time, not very much time. I will 34years of age after 10 years. I would become a person either housewife or kindergarten teacher. I studied persistently through cyber college and then I improved my English skill so I wanted go abroad for language training. I would have a good experience by having a nice abroad for language training like this. I would become a kindergarten teacher after 2 years. I have reason to want to become teachers. If the teacher seems to be very enjoyable and seems to be very proud of myself. Because teaching is very pleasant. While I would work about kindergarten I would meet to become my husband who is very handsome and honest so I would merry with him after 2 years.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bea!
How are you doing? I hope that all is well with you today. Anyway, thank you for sharing your thoughts and dreams with me. I really hope that all wishes would come true. Keep on studying harder so you can become successful someday. Have a great day! Take care!
~Kelly^^
I would like to talk about myself after ten years.
>> I would like to talk about how I see myself in ten years.
Long time as ten years.
>> Ten years is a long time.
It seems long time to go and at the same time, not very much time.
>> It seems like it is a very long time but I feel like I don\'t have much time.
I will 34years of age after 10 years.
>> I will be thirty fours years old at that time.
I would become a person either housewife or kindergarten teacher.
>> I would become a housewife or a kindergarten teacher.
I studied persistently through cyber college and then I improved my English skill so I wanted go abroad for language training.
>> I will study persistently through cyber college and improve my English skills so I could go abroad for language training.
I would have a good experience by having a nice abroad for language training like this.
>> I would gain a good experience through a langugae training like this.
I would become a kindergarten teacher after 2 years.
>> I would like to become a kindergarten teacher after 2 years.
I have reason to want to become teachers.
>> I have a reason why I want to become a teacher.
If the teacher seems to be very enjoyable and seems to be very proud of myself.
>> I think that teaching is a very enjoyable job and it is something that I can be proud of.
Because teaching is very pleasant.
>> Because teaching is a very pleasant job.
While I would work about kindergarten I would meet to become my husband who is very handsome and honest so I would merry with him after 2 years.
>> While working as a kindergarten teacher, I hope that I could meet my future husband. I want to marry someone who is handsome and honest. I want to get married after two years.
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