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2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Homework is very difficult to me. But I will try it. Here is my homework. I had worried about English because I didn't know about English. I didn't know vocabulary, grammar, reading, writing and speaking. Some years ago, I always had planning and I studied English. But, I always failed because I was shy and lazy. Also, I was shy that I didn't study in the university. However, my family was proud of me. My husband said "I am proud of your challenge. If you would fail, that's okay. Many people don't challenge." If I wouldn't success speaking English, I am find because challenge is my study. I will challenge everyday then, I don't have to fail everyday.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ When I was reading what you have written, I was astounded.  You have a great spirit in you. Let that come out. ^^ I can feel that you have that strong will and determination to have the fluency in speaking English. You will soon succeed. Just don\'t put off the fire in you.  That fire symbolizes hope. I know you can do it. I know you do. Good luck [이름] and take care always! ^^ ~~Teacher Kris Homework is very difficult to me. >> Homework is very difficult to me make.But I will try it. >> Correct >> OR: But I will give it a shot.I had worried about English because I didn\'t know about English. >> i had worried about how to speak English because I don\'t know how to speak the language.I didn\'t know vocabulary, grammar, reading, writing and speaking. >> CorrectSome years ago, I always had planning and I studied English. >> Some years ago, I always had planned about studying English and now, I am currently studying it.But, I always failed because I was shy and lazy.  >> CorrectAlso, I was shy that I didn\'t study in the university.  >> CorrectHowever, my family was proud of me. >> CorrectMy husband said \"I am proud of your challenge. If you would fail, that\'s okay. Many people don\'t challenge.\" >> My husband said, \" I am proud of your determination. If you would fail, that\'s okay. Many people don\'t have determination in themselves.\"If I wouldn\'t success speaking English, I am find because challenge is my study. >> If I wouldn\'t succeed in being a fluent English speaker, I will not give up. I will still challenge my self.I will challenge everyday then, I don\'t have to fail everyday. >> I will challenge myself everyday so that I will not fail again.

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