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2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I disagree. These days, many things were made by human. For example, cell phone, airplane and even gun... Human always want new things. It is very important to study science and technology but they don't have emotion. I like humanism so, I want to be developed it like arts and humanities. Anyway, arts, humanities, science and technology is very difficult for me. See you next Monday. ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for making your homework. You are right, that both  of the fields must be learnt. People need it for societal development  and technological development. Anyway, [이름], please study the following corrections, okay. Take care always and see you! ^^ By the way, happy trip and enjoy your travel with your family. ^^ ~~Teacher Kris These days, many things were made by human.  >> Correct For example, cell phone, airplane and even gun... >> For example; cellphones, airplanes, guns, and etc.Human always want new things. >> Correct >> OR: Humans crave for new inventions.It is very important to study science and technology but they don\'t have emotion. >> It is very important to study Science and Technology but they are just things and they do not have emotions.I like humanism so, I want to be developed it like arts and humanities. >> In the other hand, I like to study humanism because I want to develop arts and humanities.Anyway, arts, humanities, science and technology is very difficult for me. >> By the way, arts, humanities and Science and Technology are very difficult for me to learn.

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