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학생이 쓴 원문
I will go out with my mother because she is the most influential person in my life. We have same tendency.I always saw her working hard so I spend time with my mother. I will want to give the relaxation to suffering her. In addition I will watch the Twilight movies because my favorite movie is that series because I read the books. Before I watch the movies so when I watch the movies, I can comprehend the stories concretely and understand it easier. Also, the movie has a special story about a Vampire and a common woman who fell in love to each other. I prefer a genre of fiction and a material of novelty because It dose not happen in reality. So when I watched that, I imagined many things and my feeling was very happy so that I want to watched that again. And, I will leave on a trip with my friends. We have sent together for a long time but we did not leave on many trips so I will want leave on a trip either domestic travel or overseas travel. I would be happy with them.
강사 첨삭
Hello Bea!
Good morning! Thank you for sharing your plans. I hope that you will enjoy your time with your mom and friends. Anyway, pleae review my corrections. Have a great day ahead!
~Kelly^^
I will go out with my mother because she is the most influential person in my life.
>> Correct.
We have same tendency.
>> Did you mean: We have many things in common.
I always saw her working hard so I spend time with my mother.
>> I always see her work very hard so I want to spend time with her.
I will want to give the relaxation to suffering her.
>> I want to give her time to relax because she works very hard.
In addition I will watch the Twilight movies because my favorite movie is that series because I read the books.
>> In addition, I will watch the Twilight movies because they are my favorite movie series and I have the read the books also.
Before I watch the movies so when I watch the movies, I can comprehend the stories concretely and understand it easier.
>> I read the books before watching themovies so I cna comprehend the stories concretely and understand them easily.
Also, the movie has a special story about a Vampire and a common woman who fell in love to each other.
>> Also, the movie is a special story about a vampire and an ordinary woman who fell in love to each other.
I prefer a genre of fiction and a material of novelty because It dose not happen in reality.
>> I prefer fictions and novelty materials because they don\'t hapen in reality.
So when I watched that, I imagined many things and my feeling was very happy so that I want to watched that again.
>> So when I watched those kinds of movies, I imagined many things and my feeling was very happy that I want to watch them again.
And, I will leave on a trip with my friends.
>> Also I want to travel with my friends.
We have sent together for a long time but we did not leave on many trips so I will want leave on a trip either domestic travel or overseas travel.
>> We have spent time together but do not travel often so I want to take a trip with them either domestic or overseas.
I would be happy with them.
>> Correct.
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