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학생이 쓴 원문
Here is my homework.
I work for my children.
Nevertheless, I am happy.
I can do a lot of things for my family like another parents.
I thank that I can work and have my job.
However, sometimes I think...
If someone would work for me, I would study very hard in university.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you? Well, thank you for making your homework.
I really appreciate it. I understand that as a mother, you even
risk your life for your family. And, you will do your best just for them.
I salute you for being a mother. Mothers are the best. ^^
Take care always, [이름].
~~Teacher Kris
I work for my children.
>> CorrectNevertheless, I am happy.
>> CorrectI can do a lot of things for my family like another parents.
>> As a parent, I would do a lot of things for my family.I thank that I can work and have my job.
>> I am thankful that I can still work and I have my job.However, sometimes I think...If someone would work for me, I would study very hard in university.
>>Sometimes, am I thinking that if someone would work for me, I would study very hard in a university.
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