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2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Here is my homework. I work for my children. Nevertheless, I am happy. I can do a lot of things for my family like another parents. I thank that I can work and have my job. However, sometimes I think... If someone would work for me, I would study very hard in university.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you? Well, thank you for making your homework. I really appreciate it. I understand that as a mother, you even risk your life for your family. And, you will do your best just for them. I salute you for being a mother. Mothers are the best. ^^ Take care always, [이름]. ~~Teacher Kris I work for my children. >> CorrectNevertheless, I am happy. >> CorrectI can do a lot of things for my family like another parents. >> As a parent, I would do a lot of things for my family.I thank that I can work and have my job. >> I am thankful that I can still work and I have my job.However, sometimes I think...If someone would work for me, I would study very hard in university. >>Sometimes, am I thinking that if someone would work for me, I would study very hard in a university.

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