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학생이 쓴 원문
I will visit on my old teacher at his home to see how he was doing. The teacher was biting me head off because I was habitually late for school. Also, I sat in the first row and faced the teacher so the teacher called on me for an answer to his question. When I was a his student, he married so we prepared a nuptial song. While we were prepared that after school, we were very happy and funny so I do not forget him. He was a very inspiring teacher and he was well qualified as a teacher. Also, I will spend time preciously. I have been busy lately so I do not have the least interest in my around. I will look all around slowly and I will walk slow on my neighborhood. I will embrace anything in my heart so I do not miss that and I will accept reality. Finally, On the last day of earth. I will say “I love you” to my family and friends. I have a brusque manner so I did not express affection. If I do not do it now, I will only regret it and I will reveal my innermost feelings only to them.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Bea!
Thank you for constantly dropping by in the composition board. You are such a sweet person. You know how to value relationship. Keep it up! Stay happy always.
~Kelly^^
I will visit on my old teacher at his home to see how he was doing.
>> I will visit my former teacher at his home to see/check how he was doing.
The teacher was biting me head off because I was habitually late for school.
>> The teacher used to bite my head off because I was always late for my classes.
Also, I sat in the first row and faced the teacher so the teacher called on me for an answer to his question.
>> Also, I sat in the first row so my teacher called me to answer his question.
When I was a his student, he married so we prepared a nuptial song.
>> When I was a his student, he got married so we prepared a nuptial song.
>> or: he got married when I was his student, so we prepared a nuptial song for him and his bride.
While we were prepared that after school, we were very happy and funny so I do not forget him.
>> While we were preparing that after school, we were very happy and funny so I could not forget him.
He was a very inspiring teacher and he was well qualified as a teacher.
>> Correct
Also, I will spend time preciously.
>> Also, I will spend precious time with him.
I have been busy lately so I do not have the least interest in my around.
>> I have been busy lately so I do not have any interest about the things around me.
I will look all around slowly and I will walk slow on my neighborhood.
>> I just look around and walk slowly in my neighborhood.
I will embrace anything in my heart so I do not miss that and I will accept reality.
>> I will embrace everything deep in my heart so I won\'t miss them so I can accept reality.
Finally, On the last day of earth. I will say “I love you” to my family and friends.
>> Finally, on my last day on earth, I will say “I love you” to my family and friends.
I have a brusque manner so I did not express affection.
>> I have a brusque manner so I do not express my affection to them.
If I do not do it now, I will only regret it and I will reveal my innermost feelings only to them
>> If I do not do it now, I will only regret it later. I will express my innermost feelings only to them.
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