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2014-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I had dinner with my family last on Friday. We had food of duck's. But you heard "We had food of dog's" because of my bad pronunciation. When I heard, I was surprised. I like dogs and most Korean people like dogs. However, some bad old people like to eat dogs. These people are very a little. So, my country government is giving them a lot of punishment and fine. Most Korean people love animals. I will introduce culture of my country. My daughters and I went to the public bathhouse. The public bathhouse are Korean's culture. There are men's bathhouse and women's bathhouse. Also, all people can go the Korean dry sauna called Jjimjilbang. Of course, all people must wear clothes. Most Korea's mother like to go there with their family. There are many kind of room. They can eat Korean food in there. I want you to visit there and to try it. While many foreigners visit my country, they want to experience in there.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Happy Thursday! Thank you sharing to me about your culture. I am sorry that  I misunderstood some of the words that you were uttering. It\'s just that the pronunciation is not that clear. I really advice you to  practice on that part, okay. Thank you so much. I really want to try sauna but I don\'t know where I can find sauna  in my city. kk ^^ By the way, [이름], please study the following corrections, okay. Take care always and see you! ^^ ~~Teacher Kris I had dinner with my family last on Friday. >> I had a dinner with my family last Friday.We had food of duck\'s. >> We had a duck for dinner.But you heard \"We had food of dog\'s\" because of my bad pronunciation. >> But you hear, \"We had food of dog\'s\" because of my bad pronunciation.When I heard, I was surprised. >> CorrectI like dogs and most Korean people like dogs. >> CorrectHowever, some bad old people like to eat dogs. >>CorrectThese people are very a little. >> These people are very bad.So, my country government is giving them a lot of punishment and fine. >> So, the government is giving them punishments and fines.Most Korean people love animals.>> CorrectI will introduce culture of my country. >> I will introduce about the culture of my country.My daughters and I went to the public bathhouse. >> CorrectThe public bathhouse are Korean\'s culture. >> The public bathhouses are Korean\'s culture.There are men\'s bathhouse and women\'s bathhouse. >> There are bathhouses for men and for women.Also, all people can go the Korean dry sauna called Jjimjilbang.  >> Also, all people can go into the Korean dry sauna called Jjimjimbang.Of course, all people must wear clothes. >> CorrectMost Korea\'s mother like to go there with their family. >> Most Korean mothers like to go there with their family.There are many kind of room. >> There are many kinds of rooms.They can eat Korean food in there. >> CorrectI want you to visit there and to try it. >> CorrectWhile many foreigners visit my country, they want to experience in there. >> When foreigners visit my country, they go there to have an experience.

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