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What is your opinion about,"Television, newspapers, and magazines pay too much attention to the lives of famous people."? Most people think famous people life are very expensive like royal family. So most people envy famous people life. A lot of news were made for our attention. In my opinion, we have to protect famous people life and Television, newspapers and magazines have to protect it too. If we don't have attention, this problem would be solve.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Happy Friday! ^^ Thank you so much for making your homework. Well, nowadays, there are many paparazzi who always keep on  following celebrities. Sometimes, they even make issues just to make a trend. That is actually bad. They should stop doing it. They must! ^^ By the way, please study the following corrections below, okay. take care always! ^^ See you! ^^ ~~Teacher Kris Most people think famous people life are very expensive like royal family. >> Most people think that famous people\'s lives are very expensive like royal families.So most people envy famous people life. >> So, most people envy there lives.A lot of news were made for our attention. >> CorrectIn my opinion, we have to protect famous people life and Television, newspapers and magazines have to protect it too. >> In my opinion, we have to protect the lives of famous people and televisions, newspapers and magazines should protect it too.If we don\'t have attention, this problem would be solve. >> If we do not put too much attention to this, the problem would be solved.