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Do you think Watching television is a waste of time? Why?
I like watching television. For example dramas, shopping, news etc.
These days, I am trying that I don't watch dramas.
After I watched dramas, I wanted to watch dramas again, again and again.
Often I didn't do work to do.
So, I think that watching television is a waste of time.
I think that watching television is like drug.
However, I think that watching news is very useful.
I like watching news.
So, watching television is not a waste of time.
I want to spend useful time, when I watch television.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you? Thank you so much for making your homework.
Sometimes watching movies or television is kind of addictive but we have to know
our time and our priorities. Let us not make ourselves as couch potatoes.
By the way, please study the following corrections below and practice it, okay.
Have a good day and take care! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
I like watching television.
>> Correct
For example dramas, shopping, news etc.
>> For example, dramas, shopping, news and etc.These days, I am trying that I don\'t watch dramas.
>> These days, I am trying not to watch dramas.After I watched dramas, I wanted to watch dramas again, again and again.
>> After watching dramas, I wanted to watch dramas agaim and again.Often I didn\'t do work to do.
>> I often skip doing works.So, I think that watching television is a waste of time.
>> CorrectI think that watching television is like drug.
>> CorrectHowever, I think that watching news is very useful.
>> CorrectI like watching news.
>> CorrectSo, watching television is not a waste of time.
>> CorrectI want to spend useful time, when I watch television.
>> Correct
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