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2014-12-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Do you agree that women are better teachers than men? Why? I don't know about that. However, I want women teachers for my children. Because my children are girls. sometimes they need to help as woman. Women teachers can help my daughters better than men. However, if my child is a son, I want men teachers for my son. Men teachers can understand my son better than women. Anyway, I think that all teachers of the world are great people because I respect all teachers teaching for someone.

강사 첨삭

  Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you? I agree with you that teachers are great people. Without teachers, a lot of people are uneducated or illiterate so I consider teachers as heroes. Thank you by the way for the appreciation. :) So, I think it is up to you to choose teachers to teach your children. The most important thing is your children will learn something.   Have a great day and see you! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   I don\'t know about that. >> Correct >> OR: I do not have any idea about it.However, I want women teachers for my children. >> However, I want women teachers to teach my children because my children are girls.sometimes they need to help as woman. >> Sometimes they need help from the women.Women teachers can help my daughters better than men. >> CorrectHowever, if my child is a son, I want men teachers for my son. >> However, if I have a son, I would like to have men teachers for my son.Men teachers can understand my son better than women. >> CorrectAnyway, I think that all teachers of the world are great people because I respect all teachers teaching for someone. >> Correct 

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