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People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Many people want to learn in university. But most Korean people want to receive their university diploma because they think that the diploma is very important in Korea. Many company of Korea ask their new employees the diploma when they recruit their new employees. That is why most Korean people want to receive the diploma. However nowaday many company of Korea are changing that when they recruit their new employees, they don't want the university diploma.

Hi [이름]! Happy Friday!^^ Thank you so much for mkaing your homework. Yes, you are right that diploma and certificates are very important for job hiring. So, it is really important to enter university or other educational institutions just to avail some certificates. Therefore, education is very important.   [이름], I can see that you are improving so keep it up! ^^ Take care and see you! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   Many people want to learn in university. >> Correct  But most Korean people want to receive their university diploma because they think that the diploma is very important in Korea. >> CorrectMany company of Korea ask their new employees the diploma when they recruit their new employees. >> Many companies of Ko0rea ask their new employees their diploma when they recruit them. That is why most Korean people want to receive the diploma. >> CorrectHowever nowaday many company of Korea are changing that when they recruit their new employees, they don\'t want the university diploma. >> However, nowadays, many companies in Korea are changing that they recruit their new employees, they don\'t want the university diploma.