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If I have received a gift of money, I would buy tickets to a concert.
Concert of Korea is very famous in the world.
But I never attended a big concert, so I want to buy tickets of concert.
I want to attend a big concert with my husband.
강사 첨삭
Hi Suny! ^^
How are you? Wow! Tickets for a big concert is a little bit expensive. kk.
But anyway, that is your dream. Go and achieve it and enjoy the concert with your husband. :)
Take care always and have a blessed day ahead. :)
~~Teacher Kris
If I have received a gift of money, I would buy tickets to a concert.
>> If I have received money as gift, I would buy tickets for a concert. Concert of Korea is very famous in the world.
>> CorrectBut I never attended a big concert, so I want to buy tickets of concert.
>> But I never attended a big concert, so I want to buy tickets for a concert.I want to attend a big concert with my husband.
>> Correct
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