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학생이 쓴 원문
If you could change one thing about yourself, what would that be and why?
If I could change one thing for me, I want to turn back the time.
So, I would meet my mother and spend enjoyable time with my mother.
I was sorry that I didn't have to spend enjoyable time with my mother.
I miss my mother and I am sorry to her.
I was a bad daughter to her.
If I could meet her, I would tell her I love you, I miss you and I am sorry.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
:( I felt so sad when I read what you have written.
You really miss your mother, don\'t you? I know what you feel about losing a mother.
I am feeling the same way too. We have the same case, [이름]. But, we have to move on
because no matter what we do, we can\'t turn back the time. So, as a mother, you have to
take good care of your health and your children.
Smile my dear. Don\'t be sad. You will look ugly if you don\'t smile. :)
Take care!
See you!
~~Teacher Kris
If I could change one thing for me, I want to turn back the time.
>> If I could change one thing, I would turn back the time.So, I would meet my mother and spend enjoyable time with my mother.>> Correct
I was sorry that I didn\'t have to spend enjoyable time with my mother.
>> I was sorry that I couldn\'t spend enjoyable time with my mother.I miss my mother and I am sorry to her.
>> I miss my mother and I am sorry for her. I was a bad daughter to her.
>> I was a bad daughter to her.If I could meet her, I would tell her I love you, I miss you and I am sorry.
>> Correct
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