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2015-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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If you could change one thing about yourself, what would that be and why? If I could change one thing for me, I want to turn back the time. So, I would meet my mother and spend enjoyable time with my mother. I was sorry that I didn't have to spend enjoyable time with my mother. I miss my mother and I am sorry to her. I was a bad daughter to her. If I could meet her, I would tell her I love you, I miss you and I am sorry.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! :( I felt so sad when I read what you have written. You really miss your mother, don\'t you? I know what you feel about losing a mother. I am feeling the same way too. We have the same case, [이름]. But, we have to move on because no matter what we do, we can\'t turn back the time. So, as a mother, you have to take good care of your health and your children. Smile my dear. Don\'t be sad. You will look ugly if you don\'t  smile. :) Take care! See you!   ~~Teacher Kris   If I could change one thing for me, I want to turn back the time. >> If I could change one thing, I would turn back the time.So, I would meet my mother and spend enjoyable time with my mother.>> Correct I was sorry that I didn\'t have to spend enjoyable time with my mother. >> I was sorry that I couldn\'t spend enjoyable time with my mother.I miss my mother and I am sorry to her. >> I miss my mother and I am sorry for her. I was a bad daughter to her. >> I was a bad daughter to her.If I could meet her, I would tell her I love you, I miss you and I am sorry. >> Correct

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