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I don't like Valentines day because it is business.
I think that chocolate's companies make Valentines day for their profit.
So I dont like it.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Valentines!
I was quite shocked with your thought about Valentines. Why do you hate Valentines so much?
Yet Valentines day is the day of LOVE. :) Actually, not only chocolate companies are earning
profit during the valentines day but a lot of people are also earning for selling gifts and flowers.
You can not stop chocolate companies for making chocolates because people are demanding
for it. By the way, I think the chocolate companies are not responcible for the decalaration of the
the Valentines day so dont blame them. kk.
I love you [이름]!kk. Spread the love! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
I don\'t like Valentines day because it is business.
>> I don\'t like valentines day because business establishments will grow.I think that chocolate\'s companies make Valentines day for their profit.>> I think that Chocolate companies made the Valentines day for their own profit.
So I dont like it.
>> So, I don\'t like it.
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