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I am thought by these words that my book which the title is The Witches of Pendle.
These words are a lot of in this book.
This story is not normal.
In Pendle, many people believe witches.
So, some poor family were died by many people.
Poor family lived in beautiful mountain and they didn't like people of village.
So they cursed people of village and their happiness was broken by people.
They only wanted to seek their happiness.
For example, warm room, believe and take care of them.
Nowadays, we don't believe witches but we can make witches as rumor.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow! You just made a summary of the book that you read. kk. I think The Witches of Pendle is
interesting. I don\'t know the whole story but basing on the summary, this book is a good one.
Actually, witches do exist nowadays but they don\'t look like a typical witch like everybody knows.
People who can do black or white magic and supernatural activities are called witches or wizards.
Anyway, I really want to read the book. kk. I hope it is available on e-book.
By the way, please review your corrections below okay. Thank you [이름].
Take care!
See you!
~~Teacher Kris
I am thought by these words that my book which the title is The Witches of Pendle.
>> I thought of these words from my book whis is entitled, The Witches of Pendle.These words are a lot of in this book.
>> I can see a lot of these words in the book.This story is not normal.
>> This story is strange.In Pendle, many people believe witches.
>> In Pendle, many people believe in witches.
>> OR: In Pendle, many people believe that witches exist.So, some poor family were died by many people.
>> So, some poor family were murdered by some people.Poor family lived in beautiful mountain and they didn\'t like people of village.
>> Poor family lived in beautiful mountain and they didn\'t like the people in the village.So they cursed people of village and their happiness was broken by people.>> So, they cursed the people in the village and their happiness was broken by the people.
They only wanted to seek their happiness.
>> CorrectFor example, warm room, believe and take care of them.
>> For example, warm room and care givers. Nowadays, we don\'t believe witches but we can make witches as rumor.
>> Nowadays, we don\'t believe in witches but we can make witches as a rumor.
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