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2015-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

These days, I am trying to memorize English words. But It is very difficult. I know that English is very important in the future. Of course, nowadays English is very important. So, I send my children to English academy. But, my children don't know importance of English. I worry about that. My youngest daughter is going to learn English in English academy from next week. So I have to memorize English words more than now to teach my youngest daughter. I say "Cheer up" to myself.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It is good that you are trying to memorize English vocabularies. I\'m happy about what you are doing. In that way, you Enlgish skill will continuously improve. It is also good that you will send you youngest daughter to the English Academy. That is a good news! ^^ Like you have said that English is very important so I would like to say, \"Do your best!\" ^^ Good luck to your youngest daughter! ^^ By the way, please study your corrections below. Take care! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   These days, I am trying to memorize English words. >> CorrectBut It is very difficult. >> Correct >> OR: But, memorizing it is very difficult/hard.I know that English is very important in the future. >> CorrectOf course, nowadays English is very important. >> CorrectSo, I send my children to English academy. >> So, I send my children to the English Academy for them to learn English.But, my children don\'t know importance of English. >> But, my children don\'t know the importance of English.I worry about that. >> CorrectMy youngest daughter is going to learn English in English academy from next week. >> My youngest daughter will start learning English in the English academy next week.So ,I have to memorize English words more than now to teach my youngest daughter. >> CorrectI say \"Cheer up\" to myself. >> Correct

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