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2015-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Think of the embarrassing moments that you had. Think of other adjectives that you could use in your composition. After I ate some meats, I felt terrible stomachache like a butterfly in my stomach. I couldn't find a restroom. So I had to wet my clothes with my pee. I don't want to remember this situation.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ What a terrible situation you had expreienced. OMG. Next time, do not eat too much eat. Maybe your stomach is so sensitive to meat. By the way, butterfly in my stomach means nervous. So I think you better use other idioms. Anyway, thank you for making your homework and I will see you in our class. :) Take care always! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   After I ate some meats, I felt terrible stomachache like a butterfly in my stomach. >> After I ate meat, I could feel a terrible stomach ache.I couldn\'t find a restroom.  >> CorrectSo I had to wet my clothes with my pee. >>  CorrectI don\'t want to remember this situation. >> Correct

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