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2015-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

I can speak with many foreigner. I can trip without guider. I can study for myself. I can teach a second language to my children. I can guide for many foreigner. So I think that learning a second language are very importance.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you today? I hope you are doing good, :) Thank you for making your homework. It\'s good that you are able to speak with many foreigners and you can go for a tour alone. I\'m proud of you. All you have to do is to polish your English skills. :)   By the way, please study your corrections below. Take care always and have a great day ahead.   ~~Teacher Kris   I can speak with many foreigner. >> I can speak with many foreigners.I can trip without guider. >> I can go for a tour without a tour guide.I can study for myself. >> I can study with myself.I can teach a second language to my children. >> CorrectI can guide for many foreigner. >> I can guide many foreigners.So I think that learning a second language are very importance. >> So, I think learning a second language is very important.

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