^^
학생이 쓴 원문
I can speak with many foreigner.
I can trip without guider.
I can study for myself.
I can teach a second language to my children.
I can guide for many foreigner.
So I think that learning a second language are very importance.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you today? I hope you are doing good, :)
Thank you for making your homework.
It\'s good that you are able to speak with many foreigners
and you can go for a tour alone. I\'m proud of you.
All you have to do is to polish your English skills. :)
By the way, please study your corrections below.
Take care always and have a great day ahead.
~~Teacher Kris
I can speak with many foreigner.
>> I can speak with many foreigners.I can trip without guider.
>> I can go for a tour without a tour guide.I can study for myself.
>> I can study with myself.I can teach a second language to my children.
>> CorrectI can guide for many foreigner.
>> I can guide many foreigners.So I think that learning a second language are very importance. >> So, I think learning a second language is very important.
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