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In my country, the popular nightlife is club of night. Many young people go to there on Friday and they meet many people there. However I don't like there because there are many people. In club are very noisy thing. For example noisy music, noisy people and noisy talk about.. When I was young, I drank some beer there and I came home early.

Hi [이름]! How are you? Thank you for sharing your ideas and your experiences. I actually call the club as hell. Why? Because people get crazy inside the club and they do bad things. Anwyay, let us talk about your sentence construction. You have to be careful on your grammar, okay. Please study the corrections that I gave you. Thank you and have a great day ahead. See you! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris     In my country, the popular nightlife is club of night. >> In my country, the popular nightlife is all about the club.Many young people go to there on Friday and they meet many people there. >> Many young people go  there on Fridays to meet a lot of people. However I don\'t like there because there are many people. >> However, I don\'t like it there because there are many people.In club are very noisy thing. >> It is very noisy in the club. For example noisy music, noisy people and noisy talk about.. >> For example: noisy people and noisy music.When I was young, I drank some beer there and I came home early. >> When I was young, I drank alcoholic drinks there but I went home early.