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학생이 쓴 원문
Our parents of all of the world love us because we are their treasure.
I am parent, my children's mother.
My children are very special to me.
I will be loving them until I die.
However nowadays many parents choose or think with a lot of dangerous things.
For example they don't keep their children and don't give their children love.
I can't understand it.
If my parent would live with me, I could be happy than now.
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--Teacher Kris
Our parents of all of the world love us because we are their treasure.
>> No one will love us the way parents do. They treat their children as their treasure.I am parent, my children\'s mother.
>> I am a parent, a mother to my children.My children are very special to me.
>> Correct!I will be loving them until I die.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I will love them until I die.
However nowadays many parents choose or think with a lot of dangerous things.
>> However, nowadays, many parents are becoming dangerous.
For example they don\'t keep their children and don\'t give their children love.
>> For example, they don\'t keep and love their children.I can\'t understand it.
>> Correct!
>> OR: I don\'t understand why.If my parent would live with me, I could be happy than now. >> If my parents would live with me, I could have been happier.
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