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2015-03-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Our parents of all of the world love us because we are their treasure. I am parent, my children's mother. My children are very special to me. I will be loving them until I die. However nowadays many parents choose or think with a lot of dangerous things. For example they don't keep their children and don't give their children love. I can't understand it. If my parent would live with me, I could be happy than now.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!   It is nice to see your work again! I hope that you are having a great evening. I also want to thank you for doing the homework. I\'ll talk to you soon! Take care always!   --Teacher Kris     Our parents of all of the world love us because we are their treasure. >> No one will love us the way parents do. They treat their children as their treasure.I am parent, my children\'s mother. >> I am a parent, a mother to my children.My children are very special to me. >> Correct!I will be loving them until I die. >> Correct! >> OR: I will love them until I die. However nowadays many parents choose or think with a lot of dangerous things. >> However, nowadays, many parents are becoming dangerous. For example they don\'t keep their children and don\'t give their children love. >> For example, they don\'t keep and love their children.I can\'t understand it. >> Correct! >> OR: I don\'t understand why.If my parent would live with me, I could be happy than now. >> If my parents would live with me, I could have been happier. 

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