^^

Hi [이름],

Thank you for making a composition. It\'s really nice to know that you can have an idea about someone just by looking on how a person wears his or her clothes. I believe that you are a good observer. Keep up the good work!

Please have time to read the following corrections. 

~~Teacher Kris

In my case, I don\'t often buy my clothes.

>>Correct

>>OR: In my case, I don\'t usually buy my clothes.
After I bought my clothes, I wore for a long time.

>>After I bought my clothes, I wore them for a long time.
So I don\'t know about fashion.

>>That\'s why I don\'t know about fashion.

>>OR: That\'s why I don\'t know a lot about fashion.
However I can know about a person through his fashion.

>>However, I can have an idea about a person through his fashion sense.
For example, someone always wears new fashion. When they work, they want to be correct about their work.

>>For example, if someone always wears new fashion, I can say that he or she wants to be correct in doing his or her work.
Someone always wears casual. When they work, they want to be free about their work.
>>And when someone always wears casual, it seems like that person wants to be comfortable or feel free to move when he or she works.

In my case, I like to wear casual but I want to be correct about my work. ^^

>>In my case, I like to wear casual but I want to be correct in the work that I do. ^^