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2015-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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I want to live in a countryside because there are a lot of fresh air. It is very important for our life. I like there. In the city, there are many cars and pollution. However I want to live the city because of my children's education. I think that the city is made the education environment. After 3 years, I will move the city with my family downtown of Pyeougtaek. Pyeougtaek city is not a big city but after 3 years, this city will be a big city. So, I have to save a lot of money to move there.

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Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you? I hope you are feeling good today. I can see that you have a goal in life. You have a big dream to achieve. Good luck to you. I hope you will be able to meet your dreams and goals in life. Take care always and good luck agaimn to you and to your family. :) Bye bye [이름]! ^^ :(   ~~Teacher  Kris     I want to live in a countryside because there are a lot of fresh air. >> I want to live in a countryside because the air is fresh. It is very important for our life. >> It is very important for our lives. I like there. >> I like it there. In the city, there are many cars and pollution. >> Correct However I want to live the city because of my children\'s education. >> However, I want to live the city because of my children\'s education. I think that the city is made the education environment. >> I think that the city is made for Education. After 3 years, I will move the city with my family downtown of Pyeougtaek. >> After 3 years, my family and I will move in the city downtown of Pyeougtaek.Pyeougtaek city is not a big city but after 3 years, this city will be a big city. >> CorrectSo, I have to save a lot of money to move there. >> Correct

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