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People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Many Korean people don't enjoy their work in their office. These days in Korea, many young people want to have their job but it is very difficult. So many young people don't have their job. Before they have their job, they have the part time. Pay of the part time is very low. If they would have their job, they don't like it but they have to work because they need money. So many people can't have to enjoy their job. These days, I often thank that I have my job.

Hi [이름]!   Thank you for making an effort to do your homework. You did a great job by the way. You are almost there! There were only few mistakes. Good job for that! Anyway, just continue with your studies and I hope to see an improvement on our next meeting. See you soon. Take care always because I care. kkk   ~~Teacher Kris   People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. >> CORRECTMany Korean people don\'t enjoy their work in their office. >> BETTER: Many Korean people don\'t enjoy their work in their offices.These days in Korea, many young people want to have their job but it is very difficult. >> BETTER: These days in Korea, many young people want to have a job but they find it very difficult.So many young people don\'t have their job.>> So, many young people don\'t have a job. Before they have their job, they have the part time.>> Before they were employed, they were engaged to part time jobs. Pay of the part time is very low.>> The pay for part time jobs is very low. If they would have their job, they don\'t like it but they have to work because they need money.>> If they have the job already but they don\'t like it, they still have to work because they need money. >> If they don\'t like their job, they still have to work because they need money. So many people can\'t have to enjoy their job.>> So, many people cannot enjoy their jobs. These days, I often thank that I have my job. >> BETTER: These days, I am still thankful to have a job.