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[이름] dear,

How are you doing at this moment? I hope that everything\'s fine. Well, regarding your homework I want to compliment you because you showed a big improvement when it comes to sentence construction. You were able to formulate more meaningful sentences. Kudos for that! I hope that you will continue doing that not only in your homework but also in speaking during our classes.

Well, that\'s all for today and I\'ll see you soon.

Bye. Take care.

~~Teacher Kris

When I go to my office with my car because my office locate a countryside.

>> I go to my office using my car because it is located in a countryside.

>> OR: Since my office is in a countryside, I go to work by car.
If I want to take a bus, I have to wait about for 2 hours.

>> If I want to take a bus, I have to wait for about 2 hours.
The bus runs 2 times for 3 hours.
>> BETTER: The bus operates twice for a three-hour period.
So, I can save a lot of time because of my car.
>> CORRECT
People\'s lives are very comfortable as many people use a lot of transportation
>> People\'s lives are very comfortable because they use a lot of modes of transportation.

>> People\'s lives are very comfortable because they utilize different modes of transportation.
But they make a lot of problem as pollution.
>> But they cause a lot of problems such as pollution.
So we have to protect nature environmental from transportation\'s pollution.

>> So we have to protect the nature and the environment from the problems being caused by vehicles such as pollution.