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2015-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

1. abhor : I abhor a man who is very selfish. 2. abeeration : I sometimes want the aberration in my life. 3. amiable : Her parents seemed very amiable 4. coherent : My team leader always has coherent about his idea. 5. confidant : She and he are confidant.

강사 첨삭

Hello dear [이름]!   I appreciate it a lot for doing your homework today. Good job for that! Your sentences are almost correct however it would be better if you can construct a more compound or complex sentence. Although, they are correct but I suggest that you make them more colorful and meaningful, OK?   Nonetheless, you show interest in accomplishing all of the homework that I am giving you. So, I commend you for that!   Thank you and take care of yourself always.   ~~Teacher Kris   1. abhor : I abhor a man who is very selfish. >> CORRECT2. abeeration : I sometimes want the aberration in my life.>> CORRECT 3. amiable : Her parents seemed very amiable>> Her parent seemed very amiable. 4. coherent : My team leader always has coherent about his idea.>> My team leader has always been coherent about his idea. 5. confidant : She and he are confidant. >> She and he are confidants.

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