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학생이 쓴 원문
I disagree.
Sometimes I saw some wrong progress in my office, but my co-workers didn't fix wrong progress.
They worked their works with wrong progress.
Finially, they had to work again.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] -
You are responsible as always.
I want to appreciate your time in doing our homeworks despite your busy schedule.
I hope that you will have a wondferful evening!I\'ll talk to you later .^^
= Teacher Bella =
I disagree.
>> Correct!
Sometimes I saw some wrong progress in my office, but my co-workers didn\'t fix wrong progress.
>> Sometimes, I can say that progress is not always good, an example is in our office. However, my colleagues just go with it.
They worked their works with wrong progress.
>> They are working not knowing that they are not getting any progress.
Finially, they had to work again.
>> At the end of the day, they have to work again.
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