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I have some friends and one close friend. When I was a student in middle school, I met her. She was a small and a cute girl and I was a tall and a little fat girl. We went to school together and after school we played everyday. After we grow up, we are married eath other. She has a son and I have two daughters. Her son and my first daughter become friends. We can't often meet together. She is living in Osan city and I am living in the country of Anjung. So we often call and talk about a lot of things. For example, our husband, our children and our family in laws. I like her. I hope that we will spend enjoyable time for a long time.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Wow! That is a very long friendship that you have with your best friend! ^^ You\'ve been friends since middle school. Good work in expressing your thoughts and opinions about the topic. You write well although we still need to build up your vocabulary. There were also some hitches on the verb tenses used but a very minor mistakes. ^^   See you in class!   = Teacher Bella =     I have some friends and one close friend. >> I have some friends but I do have a best friend. When I was a student in middle school, I met her. >> I met her back in middle school. She was a small and a cute girl and I was a tall and a little fat girl. >> She was a petite and cute girl while I was tall and a little chubby. We went to school together and after school we played everyday. >> We went to school together and played with each other everyday after school. After we grow up, we are married eath other. >> We got married when we grew up. She has a son and I have two daughters. >> She had a son while I had two daughters. Her son and my first daughter become friends. >> Her son and my firstborn became friends. We can\'t often meet together.She is living in Osan city and I am living in the country of Anjung. >> We couldn\'t get together often since she lives in Osan city while I live in Anjeong. So we often call and talk about a lot of things. For example, our husband, our children and our family in laws. >> So we call each other often to talk about our everyday lives like about our husbands, our children and our families-in-law. I like her. I hope that we will spend enjoyable time for a long time. >> I am fond of her and I hope to have more enjoyable memories with her for a long time.